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Too Late - OC Drabble

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Amaya smiled – but it was fake.
She nodded and chatted vibrantly – but it was an act.
She complimented the new couple – but it was forced.
She laughed along with the group – but inside, she was screaming.
Gasping for breath.
Pleading, hoping this was a dream.
A nightmare.
It couldn't be real.
Why was she feeling this?
This pain?
This agony?
This torture?
The dark-haired man held his girlfriend around the waist as he smirked.
The blonde girl never seemed to stop swooning.
Amaya's green eyes flickered away, looking at the ground.
She couldn't bare it.
Amaya made an excuse and ran from the room.
The dark-haired man watched her leave, his eyes showing something hidden.
She was found on a hill by her friend, the sun setting in the distance.
The glow of the sun cast an aura about her delicate face.
Streaked with tears.
He embraced her, sighing, knowing, and wishing it was him instead she loved.
Weeks later, the dark-haired man knocked on her door.
Panting.
But not from running.
His lungs were unable to retain air.
His heart feeling a constant, sharp ache.
She opened the red door and was surprised he was here.
He explained, reaching out for her, desperate.
But she was untouchable.
She shook her head sadly.
Someone was heard from inside, "Amaya? Where's my jacket?"
His eyes flickered behind her and he knew.
His heart beated viciously in his chest.
She whispered, barely lighter than the wind;
"You're too late."
Heya dudes!!! ;P

Yeah well, surprisingly, my THIRD deviation has been published to cyber space! Dun dun dun!!! lol. :D
To those who are surprised, close your pie-hole and read. Hahaha, I'm joking, sorry.
I...don't know what compelled me to write this but I thought it might help me get a better grip on the situation. Well, it was a spark of inspiration and i wrote. Ta-daa~~~
Anyway, sorry if you don't understand. ^^; I can be very deep and inscrutable at times. lol, hardly, actually.
JUST IN CASE (and sorry if i spoil it): the dark-haired man is the one she has known for a long time (a really good friend) and she thought there was something between them. There is though, but he is dating the blonde because he is a very confused person and, to help him rid thoughts of Amaya, he dates the blonde. The one who hugs Amaya on the hill is her best friend (a guy) and is the one who calls out to her when the other man comes to her door after realising what he feels, hence, dumping the blonde.
I know I'm detailed on these descriptions and I'm sorry. *Ahh!! Don't hit me~~~, cowering in fear*
lol
CYA, FEEDBACK PLEASE XD
Breeze ;P
P.S I DIDN'T EDIT THIS SO SORRY IF ITS...EH, BAD.
AND: sorry about the pic i drew - my camera is old and sucks - always shaking and blurring the picture.
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Black-Rose2710's avatar
The descriptions are so moving, man you are getting extremely good at the sad scenes. I think that's a good thing but anyways I love the way there are one liners, it makes it that much more effective!